Thursday, 23 July 2015

The crunchy crass

WALT describe one thing with extra detail
We will:
☑️make a word bank
use precise vocabulary
write impacting sentences that make sense
partner conference


24th July

Lying  upon the spicy grass waiting for something to happen.The glistening sun started rising  up ready to shine as the sun was stretching up  into  the sky. While the pricklys we stuck in a shunning crystal it was as slippery as a slide.It looked like it was  deserted 200 years until. The sunrise pepped through  walkway.It looked blank but I imagine what we could do to make it a pack slide and a swing.And I could imagine how much fun people would find it.

1 comment:

  1. great i am amazed abut how you are writing. you very very amazed.

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